1,From my point of view, the question asked by “ Threes” is more worthwhile. The question is “what is the "participating" mean from the paragraph three? This sentence is very long, I think the meaning is that in classroom teaching tend to give girls different work from boys, thus preventing girls from taking part in some activities. but that word is mean join or take part in. I do not think is well in this sentence”.
2,The reason why I think is worthwhile is that she know the meaning of “participating” , but she confused about the appropriateness of the word in this long sentence. Perhaps most of us won’t think about a word or phrases which are written by author are appropriate or not. We take them for granted. But “ Threes” did.
3,ladies and gentlemen, let us read the paragraph 2 and 3 .Come on!ladies and gentlemen, let us read the paragraph 2 and 3 .Come on!
4,The sentence : Their research showed that many teachers who thought they were nonsexist were amazed to see how biased they appeared on videotape". But how does this phenomenon that teachers are biased in teaching appear?
5,Who can tell me the meaning of " taking over" in the sentence?
6,I don't know the word "subordination " .Would you please tell me the meaning?
7,Why does the author say that there is a similar subordination of female to male students......."
8,Come on ! let's share your questions, boys and girls!
9,Any question is Ok, let us seize the day!
10,How do you feel about the phrase " deprived of"?
11,Do you think it is wonderful or not appropriate?
12,From the paragraph ten, we get a sentence” we forget that human beings need positive reinforcement- in fact, we thrive on it”. Here we get an idea that human beings need others mental support. Don’t say something critical, especially when he is in trouble. Because at that time, he needs your help. Sometimes a positive word can change a person’s life. the “positive reinforcement” refers to spirit-lifting words or uplifting comments. What’s more, with these kind of words or activities, human beings thrive on them. We become more and more confident of ourselves. All in all, with positive reinforcement, people will lead an exiting life.
Referring to paragraph 12, we obtain a sentence “ No one wants false praise”. This is quite meaningful. If you want to praise someone, you should be sincere and the praise must be hit the nail on the head. No praise couldn’t be better than a false praise. Above all, before you give spirit-lifting words, you really need to take care of the person.
13,1,The writer is an average person ,he didn’t always got a fan mail, his payment is very low. So when he received a sprite-lifting note form the editor, he is quite inspiring. The writer told us his payment was not just means his is common, but the important of the note .
2,Because the note gave the writer quite a confidence and passion, and his is very thank for the editor, and sometimes he doubted he had the right stuff to be a writer , he read the not times and times that the not was rag-eared.
3,From my point of view, right stuff to be a writer should be responsibility and responsive , having instant wisdom ,experience, wide eyesight and knowledge. Also they should have full passion , patience and perseverance. Meanwhile,they should have subtle and sophisticated skills. His passage should appeal to all ages. To be journalist are their labor of love and should sensitive to information.
14,My partner’s passage is quite good ,I’m so shocked. From her answer to these question, I got some new ideas , especially the third answer, not only her idea is flesh but also the language is very beautiful and diversity. Looking at the third answer, I learn a lot of new language and grammar .Take “On top of that , personal passion , patience and perserverance should be taken into account” for example ,the language is quite excellent.
Reading through the passage ,I seldom find a grammar mistake. Her writing is too good to me to find a mistake. Meanwhile, her idea is blooming.
15,From paragraph one to ten, the sentence "My guess is that many who shy away from the practice are too self-conscious" is my favorite. First, there are useful Phrase and word. " Shy away from " here means " avoid doing sth because you are nervous or frighted" .And "self-conscious" has two meanings. One is nerous or embarrassed about your appearance or what other people think of you". The other is "done in a way that shows you are aware of the effect that is being produced. Refer to the sentence ,"self-conscious" here is the former meaning.
Second, from my point of view, this sentence tells us that many people avoid writing uplifting comments to other are paying too much attention to how other people will react. In our living circumstance, this phenomenon do exist and even very common. Before we doing something , we always very care about what others think of us. It's not bad, but just as an old saying goes :"Do what you want to do". Sometimes we shouldn't too care about others, we are ourselves. Furthermore, pretending ourselves is ridiculous at times.
16,I have studied English for about ten years. Now English occompanyed me everyday and everywhere. Even so, there are still a lot challeges in my study. I am very poor in listening and reading. Like listening ,I can follow the reader, but can't spell the word exactly .As for reading, when encounting difficult passages,I just can find a general idea, butthe ansers are always wrong.
Personally, the very reason is vacabulary. It seems I am difficulty in remember lots of words for a long time.For most time ,I seems just guss the general mean. But it also seems not bad.
I think about the problems over and over and ask others about it. However, different people hold different idea. One time ,I asked one of my friend how can you persist remember words everyday. She said :"When I can frequntly read a foreign newpaper or magazine, I will very excited. "Her word did shock me. of cource ,I want to improve my Enlish, and I know vacabulary is the basic.
So from my point of view, first, we shoud remember English everyday.Second,we'd better read a lot of English,for example,reading a beautiful passage.What's more,I thing the delight of leaning English is speaking,I find myself is quite interest in talking with a foreign.
We should 't worry about ourself,isn't it ?If we brave enough,confident enough,we will lean quit well.
17,But spontaneous is quite for we to connect with others.
18,From my point of view, spontaneous is the most difficult.
19,However it is not enough,isn't it?
20,I can'agree with you more.
21,I quite agree with you
22,I really don't known how to be spontaneous for others
quite good relationship with others
23,Right, Maybe sincere is the base of spontaneous.Do you aggree?
24,Thanks for your comments
25,that's true.
26,This four elements are very good for us to learn.
27,This passage tells us how to be spontaneous.
28,We always praise others with general sentences
29,We will get a quite relationship with others
30,What' your feeling when you encounter straining sentence from others?
When we learn well on these four element,
31,Yes,most time we can't hit the point
32,I think Join's is the best.
33,It has been proven innumerable times that earth gooes round the sun.
34,It has been proven innumerable times that studying in a excellent
university is good for a person
35,It has been proven innumerable times that earth gooes round the sun.
36,:I think Join's is the best.
37,:It has been proven innumerable times that studying in a excellent
:university is good for a person
38,We know that there are a growing number of robbers in our daily life. And maybe at the time we are so unluckily that encountering a robber in our house. So what’s your feeling? Of course we will be very nervous and scared. We want to escape or drive away the robber. But it has been proven several times that driving away a robber is quite hard. Even somebody will lose his life.
So how to protect both our wealth and health is a big problem. In this news which happed in USA , when the girl’ head was put gun by the robber in the garden. All of the people around them ware claim, including her parents. They tried best to claim down the robber . They talked with the robber like friends,especially Cha Cha. He invited the robber to have a glass of good wine. And then the robber was offered cheese . Cha Cha was also mentioned “ mother”. I think his purpose was to tell the robber that mother will very anxiety when her child is in trouble. Because of these ,the robber recognized his fault and apologized. What’ more, they give the robber a group of hug .From my point of view this hug is the most excellent, form this hug , the robber got love from this people. I don’t known whether he felt warm, but they made mine.
If I was them , what will I do ? Maybe I will cry or fall in a faint. So from this new , I learn that when we are in trouble the first thing we should do is to claim ourselves down. Then we think about the ways. A sentence “ beat someone with our intelligent “ strike me. Sometimes we need to give other love, that to say , let him feel good. We can view the robber as an average person, as a good man, not a robber. And maybe the result will different.
39,From the paragraph ten, we get a sentence” we forget that human beings need positive reinforcement- in fact, we thrive on it”. Here we get an idea that human beings need others mental support. Don’t say something critical, especially when he is in trouble. Because at that time, he needs your help. Sometimes a positive word can change a person’s life. the “positive reinforcement” refers to spirit-lifting words or uplifting comments. What’s more, with these kind of words or activities, human beings thrive on them. We become more and more confident of ourselves. All in all, with positive reinforcement, people will lead an exiting life.
Referring to paragraph 12, we obtain a sentence “ No one wants false praise”.This is quite meaningful. If you want to praise someone, you should be sincere and the praise must be hit the nail on the head. No praise couldn’t be better than a false praise. Above all, before you give spirit-lifting words, you really need to take care of the person.
40,1,From my point of view, there are a lot of “Dons” in our world, and Don’s spirit spreads everywhere. We know that Don wrote notes to all walks of life. However, if I were Don, I would not only write spirit-lifting words to others in a paper, but also send notes by my computer. We know that e-mail and QQ are popular in our life. If it is friends' or relatives’ birthdays, I will go to send them the lovely cards. What’s more , answering others is as important as writing notes to others. For example, when my friend is sad, I should listen . Sometime keeping silence is also a kind of taking care of friends. Meanwhile, when a person tells you something, even though you don’t know how to answer, smile is a good answer.
2.Nowadays, the relationship between people is becoming more and more cold,like the fact that some student doesn't say a word to some of his friends. And most people don’t care what happened on others.They just care about themselves, some times they scold others .The world like that is cold and unresponsive.
41,I am quite agree with your ideas.Like send cellphone to our friends .And in the West Region of China,a lot of children suffer from illiteracy and poverty let us feel cold about the world.
Your answers are very good ,they are clear and wonderful.But I think, there are still other manners to care of others.
After our one-month learning, you are expected to assess your own measures and efforts you have tried on grammar, and your progress, your current problems and puzzelment over your grammar, and your future plan to improve your English grammar.
1. TO list everything we have done in English this term, including them in one passage: passage writing, group discussion, chatting, etc]{you can use this pattern: I have written __8__ passages ( ___2150_ words in length), publish your writing online via this hoodong page.}
2. HOW do I feel about my GRAMMAR in my writing] I didn’t detected grammatical errors, but my partner helped find __26__ errors. {1. online posting on the reading process writing; 2. online discussion on the topic assigned by the teacher, 3. online chatting 4. online feedback given to other’s writing 5. comments to other’s feedback }
3. How do I feel on my partner’s help to my grammar: a. their detection ; b. their correction; (a. I am glad to have such a good and helpful partner, she has helped me with most of my errors.
4.In future I will pay more attention to my grammar by_B___ A. reading more grammar instructions and doing as many grammar drills as possible; B. finding a better partner and asking for more help from him/her C. asking for help from the teacher and other competent friends; D. others(describe them) ]
5. I think my plan to improve my grammar is workable because A. I have been trying it; B. it is suggested by the teacher; C. most other students are doing it this way; D. other(describe it) ]
6. On the whole I don’t know if I am satisfied with my grammar. On a scale of one to ten, with ten being near maximal satisfactory with my efforts on grammar, I would like to give my learning of English grammar a(n) _6__.


