I think there are many problems in my English study.In fact,I even don`t know how to improve my English.Lacking of material is my big problem in my writting.For an example,when I was told to write an article,I always don`t know what to write,it seems that there is no material in my mind,I just write what I think out without logic.I always worry about this.And I think terrible grammer is the second problem.A sentance I wrote is prety good in my opinion while tercher said it`s really bad. Whatever,I don`t care how poor my English is ,I have my passion towards it.I`ll try my best to make my English better,at least,to be more flow in my speaking and writting.``
The most word which caught my eye is confident. As we all know, Failure is the mother of success. But I just want to say:Success is the baby of confidence.
    First of all, confidence makes us happier in our life. Life is like a wonderful song, a bright and colorful painting. If confidence is with us in our life, we will find that life really becomes richer and more interesting. Then, confidence makes us brave and courageous. If we lack confidence in ourselves, how can we overcome difficulties we meet with? If we have no confidence in ourselves, how can we succeed in developing ourselves in the future?Without confidence, nothing can be accomplished.That is to say, if you want to win, you have to believe in yourself.
    Finally, I would like to use the following words as our mutual encouragement:If you think you can, you can.
1. In Para 2, why would the author tell us his payment?
He said it to show that he was not so popular to others and he was not the person who got others attention as a common teenger at that time.
2. What does this clause “until it got rag-eared” imply?
It tells us that the note is so important in the author`s whole life.
3. What do you think is the right stuff to be a writer?
In my opinion, good writing would be necessary, and he must have a little faith in his work..
I don`t agree with the answer of the first question. I think you misunderstand the question. I don`t understand the last sentence of the last answer. There is little grammar fault in your writing, but I think the sentences are not flow.
After reading the whole passage again,the sentance"When I make others feel good about themselves,I feel good too"leave me deep impression.         
  I wonder how can a person warms others and makes others feel confident through all his life without stopping.It's just like candles burn up themselves to bright the world.A spirit called dedication suddly turns up in my mind.It is such a beautiful word that brings people who need help warmth and faith.

  It recalled my childhood when I was failed in a competition.I felt unhappyand lost my heart.It is my Mom that told me not to give up.I have my ability in many other things.One failure not means ever.If you're beaten down,get up and try again.These words always make me confident and I never choose to give up when I got problems.It seems that once you receive this kind of power,It will never use up.
I don’t understand the meaning of “unconscious”.  What is meant by “nonsexist”?  Though I know the structure of the fourth sentence of paragraph 2,I can’t understand the meaning of this sentence. The last two sentences of paragraph 2 are difficult to understand.
The last sentence of paragraph 3 is too difficult to understand for me.Whice part does "thus" play in the sentence ? Does it lead something or refer to something?This word perplexes the sentence and puzzles me!!
“Experiment”, does the word in paragraph 3 have further meaning? What the author wants to tell us in paragraph 3? Does Sadkers’ research just simply prove that it is judged by teachers' unknowing feeling?
There are innumberable unusual things happening everyday.Indeed,this piece of news is one of them.
    I feel strange after hearing this at first time.It's hard to image that a robber whose aim is to get money after rushing to a house with a handgun ,he just drink some wine and ask for hugging.Is it really so incredible? Definitely,It's not.
   It's sound funny as well as pitiful.My feelings were so complex when I heard the robber say he didn't have a mother.To a real extent,a little care from others is what he want.The good wine made him calm down and hugs from people in the house warm him a lot.
   Why would this happen?I think it's due to the governmet and the society.Human beings show us that people should living togather.That means we exist in depending on others ,no one can live along.we exist in depend on others.If a person feels longly too often and he has already no money to buy food just like the intruder,the pitiful orphan,he will do something wrong.
   Be generous with your care to make our life becautiful.
After reading the whole passage again,the sentance"When I make others feel good about themselves,I feel good too"leave me deep impression.         
  I wonder how can a person warms others and makes others feel confident through all his life without stopping.It's just like candles burn up themselves to bright the world.A spirit called dedication suddly turns up in my mind.It is such a beautiful word that brings people who need help warmth and faith.
  It recalled my childhood when I was failed in a competition.I felt unhappyand lost my heart.It is my Mom that told me not to give up.I have my ability in many other things.One failure not means ever.If you're beaten down,get up and try again.These words always make me confident and I never choose to give up when I got problems.It seems that once you receive this kind of power,It will never use up.
In Paragraph 5, the author says he wants to “copy the example of Don and other friends who care enough to write uplifting comments”. Now, if you want to “copy the example” of Don, what would you choose to do?
Also, in what sense do we say the world is “cold and unresponsive”?
1.If I make a decision to be the person who warms others, I will also write to them.  Because I am a person who are not good at expressing with speaking.
2.When we feel our life is not good, and our work is not affirmed  by others, or even yourself. When we loose the faith and don`t receive any help from others. Then we feel the world is “cold and unresponsive”.

1. I have written 8 passages, 1,111 words in length.

4. In future I will pay more attention to my grammar as well as my writing skill.

5. I think my plan to improve my grammar is workable because I care more about my grammar and I make it.But my writing skill improved not so obvious. 

6. On the whole I am almost satisfied with my grammar.On a scale of one to ten, with ten being near maximal satisfactory with my efforts on grammar, I would like to give my learning of English grammar a 8.