1 I feel in our group this is a worthwhile question ! Thank you for your elaboration . The reason why I think is worthwhile is silencer know this sentence is different from others . It is a very complicated structure . So I think this is a good question .
2 Hi ,groupmembers.I'm wondering that what the phrase "hands-on work" means in paragraph 3I can't understand the word "subordination" . I am puzzled about it. In pargaraph 3 the sentence " since hands-on work with classroom materials is a ......" I can't understand the meaning of the word "hands-on work".groupmembers, what's your understanding to "The word experiment is used in quptation marks because children in a nursery school cannot do a scientific experiment in its real sense"?How to understand the two words " unintentional" and "unconscious" in pargaraph 2 ? I feel the two words' means are quite similar. The author say that there is a similar subordination of female to male students has also been obserbed in law and medical school classrooms in recent years. Why ? How is your response when you read it?
Is there any evidence the active classroom participants develop more positive attitudes and go on to higher education ?
3 When I read the second half that the author write " It is a mattter of record , and our words can be read more than once , savored and tredsured ." So I feel in our daily life , person always use telephone , e-mail or MSN communicate with each other . Most people like talking with others in internet . We had already forgotten our communicate way which is primary and more importance .
I can't imagine what about our daily life would become if we couldn't use writting instead of anything else , like talking in internet and so on . I thought we'd better writer the words which couldn't have been more inspiring on paper , this is not mean we must do it , just like the author's words " A note attaches more importance to our well-wishing . "
We are not noly be generous with our praise but also should use most importance way to express passion ourselves . This is my opinion.
4 In my opinion the author tell us his payment maybe he is not a successful person before and now he had received fan mail , it’s very important for his career . He is so popular to others now.The author thought in a world too often cold and unresponsive ,such note bring warmth and reassurance .,every person need more inspiring.or encourage.
Second,I feel maybe when the author read the note he felt so exciting that he put the note “until it got rag-eared”
I think the the right stuff to be a writer should read more wonderful books to improve their enough specialized knowledge..
5 I think your writing is very good and I like your apinion about three questions.Your answers simple so I feel maybe you can write more perfect and wonderful .
6 When I finished reading this passage , I found a wonderful sentence in it which I like very much. That is "Even if your praise is a little ahead of reality , remember that expectations are often the parents of dreams fulfilled ." I like this sentence because it makes me understand a truth "Failure is the mother of success."
Did you have any success in doing something? How can we get a great success in our life if we have not any expectations or hopes ? I feel expectations and hopes can often lead to success. Some people have not any expectations ,hopes or dreams .Maybe these person are not only worride about they will failure to do things but also shied away from doing anything.This sentence can lift up our spirits.
7 I find the problems I have in my study.Writting is very difficult for me..I could not use wonderful words or perfect sentences. Writting is different from Listening , Reading and Spenking so that I'm worried about my Writtig. In fact, I am interestde in Writting . Idecide to take to improve my study , except finish my homework I should finish 2 essays in every weekengs, this is first one. Second, I will read a prentty of good essays and wonderful words or sentence .I hope these ways can help me improve my Writting study.
8 When I finish lisening to the audio passage ,in the first place , I feel this is a so funny story that I couldn’t believe it . In the beginning the robber wantded to as a marauder , but he couldn’t success. On the contrary nothing was stolen , and no one was hurt . The robber drank a glass of wine , and all guests hugged him . Generally speaking , person always nervous or worry when they get a despoliation , in my memory bank after all robbers are bad men . It definitely is strange , isn’t it?
The world need more love . Maybe the intruder just lacked love meanwhile the guests would like to make friends with him , by this time the crime should involuntarily stop . On the other hand , the robber like to drink with these guests and they made such hug and forgiveness bring warmth and beauty . Sometimes we should give more love and more solicitude to some special person which like the robber . As bas been noted , the world need more love .
9 If I want to “copy the example” of Don, I would write uplifting comments .I will write letters that lift spirit and warm heart to my friends.Because I will earn the benefits , and I write notes I will lift people up.
In my opinion , when I need help but others don’t help me and say some satiric words .I think those words are “cold and unresponsive”.
And sometimes your sentences in my mind
I couln't understand your idea
I feel in daily life you always care of others.
1. The passages above are write by me in English this term I have written _9___ passages ( _1022___ words in length),
2. I detected __14_ grammatical errors, while my partner helped find 4____ errors.
3.. I am glad to have such a good and helpful partner, she has helped me with my errors; I regret to say that though my partner is very good, I don’t think she is of much help to my grammar .
4.In future I will pay more attention to my grammar by reading more grammar instructions and doing as many grammar drills as possible
5. I think my plan to improve my grammar is workable because most other students are doing it this way.
6. I would like to give my learning of English grammar a(n) _6__.


