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Passage writing
1.The story is very attractive to me.After reading the story and listening to the mp3 audio ,I feel a little pity with the robber and that indicates a social problem.In the story ,the robber is consider as evil,lazy,cruel …..in a word ,I think many people will consider the robber is a bad man.In fact ,we should consider what on earth will the man chose the way to be a robber?I think the robber is born a nomal person,but what caused him to rob?That makes us a deeply consideration of the society.I think the essential problem comes form the gap between rich people and poor people.Nowadays,the rich people is becoming more and more rich,meantime ,the poor people has a continued desend of level of life.They even have no money to eat,wear…..in that condition,they are fored to rob to make living.So,the story tell us that we should take serious at the gas between the riches and the poors

2.After reading the second half of the unit 2.I feel the importance of writing.I always think if a person like writing,his personality will be much more sensibility and he can feel many feelings that in the past can not felt.
   I aways find such phenomonon that among my friends and classs mates,those who do not like writing always has little feeliings about life.They like talk with each other used by telephone ,QQ,or other things.Their personality is extroverted,but they have little deeply feelings about life,love or other things.In contrary,those have a habit of writing is different.They have more feelings about life,love or psychological activities.
  I also think that people who always writing can change their attitude to other people and this habit may be good to comunication with other people.
  In a word ,writing has many great enfluence in many parts.I also like writing very much
3. 1.If my friends have some trouble in life ,I will give him a call and have a talk with him ,I will try my best to use some inspiring words to encourage him, and give him warmth and reassurance, helping him walk out of depressing.
2.Some times ,when I meet some unlucky things in my life ,but that time many friends do not understand my feeling,so I felt much more sorrow, that mans many of my friends are “cold and unresponsive” .
sunlice: you wrote some concrete examples to anwsower what and how you will to help your friends to walk out the dpressing,that quite well,people can understand quickly.I am be attracted to your imagination.

                      Problems in my English study
Although I have been learning English for at least 9 years from primary school ,I still find English a very difficult course to study.I think my problem contain these 3 pionts below:
   Firt,I find my vocabulary is too limited.Because of my poor vocabulary,I find difficult in reading ,listening and speaking.The vocabulary is the most important part in learning Eglish,so,I want to learn more English words so as to improve English.
  The second is my listening English is very poor.I think listening is very important,so I should try my best to listen more and more.
  Reading is another problem.I often find it hard to express my opinion in English.In order to improve English ,I think from now on I will read more English newspaper or English novels.
Write about Unit2
My favorite sentence is "hold on".I think every person will meet difficults when he is doing things,but only he do never give up and hold on to do it can he be successful.
  "Zhouchuanxiong"is my favorite singer and he has many good spirits that influence me a lot.One day I watched a TV program about his life experience,he said to the emcee :"When I was a young student, my parents divorces,I have no money to continue school,so I have to make money by myself to support my music school,even though I have met severe difficulties,I always said to my self"hold on,never give up!....."
Zhou's words deeply attract me .From then on,I understand a truth that every person will met difficulities in the way to success,however,only the person who never give up half way and hold on can be successful at last.Nowadays when I met frustration in my life or study,I said to my self "Never give up!hold on!".I belive that "Sunlight always comes after storm!"
                Disscussion on the understanding of the passage

1.I agree with his opinion,I also think the writer is not famous that time.
2.I think his opinion is quite right.I agree with his idea.
3.I think his idea is ok,but I think confidence is another important thing.
In addition,his grammmer is not right,he should use past-time.because the writer wrote this passeage long time ago.

1.       1.Because he wants to tell us he was not famouse at that time ,just a normal person.
2.       2.He kept the letter for a long time,always read it and he believe the note has a power that make him to get confidence.
3.       3.I think to be a writer,you should be confidence to your work and also you should write by heart.
 

                               Unit2 (second half)
After reading the second half of the unit 2.I feel the importance of writing.I always think if a person like writing,his personality will be much more sensibility and he can feel many feelings that in the past can not felt.
   I aways find such phenomonon that among my friends and classs mates,those who do not like writing always has little feeliings about life.They like talk with each other used by telephone ,QQ,or other things.Their personality is extroverted,but they have little deeply feelings about life,love or other things.In contrary,those have a habit of writing is different.They have more feelings about life,love or psychological activities.
  I also think that people who always writing can change their attitude to other people and this habit may be good to comunication with other people.
  In a word ,writing has many great enfluence in many parts.I also like writing very much
                              Grope disscusion
I felt confused about the meaning of  the word “nonsexist”.
What’s the meaning of “postgraduated”?I can understand.
Does the meaning of the phrase “ in cordance ith” can be considerd as “according with”?
The sentence “According to the researchers ,the bias is unintentional and uncounsious,but it is there and it is influencing the lives of million schoolchildren every year.”is very long.Can we understand  that “the bias is uncousious,but it has deeply influences?
What’s the differences between the word “unintentional” and “unconscious”?
How can we translated this sentance"many teachers who thought they were nonsexist were amazed to see how biased they appeared on videotape"?
What does the word “stereotyped”means?

“This has a tremendous impact on the learning process for, in general ,those students who become active classroom participants develop more posititive attitudes and go on to high achievement.
This sentence is so long ,I don't know how to analyze this  sentence's structure?”
The question is asked by Amy feng.
I think it is a worthwhile question because the sentence has a very complicated structure .I think most of us may have difficult in understanding the sentence .It has many clause in the long sentence and so do I feel it difficult to understand it. So I think this question is worthwhile.
                              Online chatting


 sunlice对slivergod说:Aha,I feel you are vevy friendly,you are a kind-hearted person!
sunlice对slivergod说:I feel you are a friendly person,your way of talking calls"spontaneous
sunlice对slivergod说:I often find you are a perfeat person
sunlice对slivergod说:I think you are a sincere person,I like make friends with you!
sunlice对slivergod说:what do you understand the word"specific"
sunlice对slivergod说:you are a kind hearted person!
sunlice对sunlice说:you have make some spelling mistakes
sunlice对sunlice说:you should use more words which learded in new class
sunlice对大家说:h
sunlice对大家说:It has been proven innumerable time that love is not canstant
sunlice对大家说:It has been proven innumerable times that eating is important to healt
sunlice对大家说:It has been proven innumerable times that EQ is very important
sunlice对大家说:It has been proven innumerable times that health is more important
sunlice对大家说:It has been proven many times that women are very sensitemental
sunlice对大家说:than money


1.I have written 10 passages ,1400words in length
2. I detected _many __ grammatical errors, while my partner helped find __1__ errors.
3.How do I feel on my partner’s help to my grammar?
a. their detection(b. help detect many of my errors)
4.In future I will pay more attention to my grammar by_
_C. asking for help from the teacher and other competent friends_
5.think my plan to improve my grammar is workable because
A. I have been trying it
6.On the whole I [A. am B. am not C. don’t know if I am] satisfied with my grammar. On a scale of one to ten, with ten being near maximal satisfactory with my efforts on grammar, I would like to give my learning of English grammar a(n) __5_.

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